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发布日期 :2018.07.23    浏览次数:1060 次

Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?


在任何社会中,关爱孩子可能是最重要的工作。因此,所有的母亲和父亲都应该被要求参加一门课程,为他们做好父母的准备。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这种观点?


当我写下我的答案时,我完全不同意所有的父母都应该上父母的课。我会用一个形容词来表达每一个主体段落。下面我将告诉你我的意思。


First main body paragraph:我不同意,因为这个想法是不切实际的


- Many adults are too busy with work and other commitments
- They may miss sessions, and would they therefore be punished?
- It would be impossible to force prospective parents to attend
- Different parenting styles, impossible to create a course that suits everyone


Second main body paragraph: 我不同意,因为它是不必要的


- Parents have been raising children without help for thousands of years
- Parents learn from family members, their own upbringing, friends...
- They learn by instinct, trial and error, getting to know their children
- Example: correcting bad behaviour, trying different strategies


完全不同意观点的引言与结论


引言:
It is true that parents shoulder a huge responsibility and that raising children is by no means an easy task. However, I completely disagree with the idea that we should therefore force all mothers and fathers to attend parenting courses.


结论:
The easiest way to write a conclusion is to paraphrase the introduction that you have already written. Start with "In conclusion", and write one sentence that summarises your answer. Can you rewrite my introduction as a one-sentence conclusion?
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