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雅思作文首句应该怎么写,雅思写作常见的扣分点
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雅思写作首句怎么写,这些你知道吗?

Should governments spend money on space exploration, or should they spend the money on problems here first?政府应该在太空探索上花钱吗?还是应该先把钱花在这里?


写出近义词
Governments = nations, countries, authorities, politicians
Spend = allocate, give, allot, provide, budget, make available, waste, award
Space exploration = space program, trips to the moon, the international space station, planets, planetary voyages
Money = budgets, taxes, resources,
Problems = concerns, issues, worries, disasters, threats, threatening, war, famine, poverty, education, homelessness, drugs, global warming
Here = on earth, in our own countries, closer to home, in developing countries, foreign aid


改写题目:With many global concerns such as war, poverty, hunger and pollution, many people do not think that nations should waste money on exploring space. (One side) However, others are convinced that expenditure on space programs is justified. (Other side)

由于许多全球性的担忧,如战争、贫困、饥饿和污染,许多人不认为国家应该在探索太空上浪费金钱。(一方面)其他人相信太空计划的开支是合理的。(另一面)

雅思写作常见的扣分

• 等级5 (话题相关度) : 文章只是部分陈述话题。 

例如,父母应不应该为儿童犯罪买单,而且建议一些方式减少儿童犯罪。
如果文章只对题目要求的其中一部分(父母应不应该为儿童犯罪买单),但是并没有建议其他方式来减少儿童犯罪,这样就会扣分。

• 等级4 (话题相关度) : 文章只与话题有少许相关。
这儿,单词“tangential”的意思是“少许相关”。这就意味着考生所写文章只与话题相关性很小。
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