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雅思大作文应该怎么写,如何布局大作文。
发布日期 :2018.05.02    浏览次数:1681 次

雅思大作文根据官方的介绍“题目中会给出一个看法、论点或某个特定题目的问题,考生需就此提供事实性的信息、概述或提出一个解决方案、论证一个观点、或评价观点和论据。考生在这部分需进行议论文形式的写作。文章字数不能少于250字,建议考生用40分钟完成。”而且还明确规定字数没达到是要扣分的,那么如何在理解题意的前提下写好这250字呢?华盟教育推荐下面方法。


3773布局
1.用3句话,根据雅思大作文题目介绍说明文章(改写题目)
2.用7句话,阐明论点、原因、举例,解释,支持或者反对细节。主题句
3.用7句话,阐明论点、原因、举例,解释,支持或者反对细节。主题句
4.用3句话,总结(双方)、现在的情况和你的意见、本声明
每句话大概在13字左右,那么20句话,文章字数在那是260个字。


例句:
题目:This essay will discuss whether parents should be forced to pay for their children’s crimes


首段说明:Many crimes and social problems are caused by children.Despite the damage these teenage criminals cause, parents are not held responsible in most countries.


2段:反对
主题句:There are many reasons why parents should not be responsible for crimes committed by teenage children.


原因1:独立性:First of all, teenagers today are independent.They often move out of the parent’s house at 18 years of age or younger.learn to take care of themselves and make their own decisions, and not stay like small children attached to their parents.


原因2父母的工作:Secondly, parents are working.They cannot watch their adolescent children all the time.
原因3父母做他们的工作:A third point is that even children from good families can sometimes commit crimes. Parents should not be responsible if they have worked hard
to raise their children properly.


3段:赞成
主题句:However, because of the many problems young troublemakers cause, I feel we should make parents responsible.


原因1:缺少父母管教:Firstly, most juvenile crimes are committed by adolescents whose parents do not care or make any effort to control their children. If
parents had to pay fines, they might make more effort.




原因2孩子不成熟:Another point is that even though the children may seem mature, they are not really able to make good decisions. Parents should be responsible
for raising and teaching their children until they are fully grown.


原因3孩子们会认为:Furthermore, if children know that their parents will have to pay, they will think carefully before doing getting into trouble


结尾:
总结段:In summary, there are good reasons both for and against making parents pay for acts committed by their children.
个人观点:However, I feel strongly that if we want to reduce the number of such crimes, we need to make parents take more responsibility.(290 words)


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