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同样的雅思写作话题,从不同的角度出题
发布日期 :2018.04.25    浏览次数:2110 次

同样的雅思写作话题,不同的角度考了一次又一次。看看下面这两个问题,例如:


A) In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
在发达国家,平均预期寿命正在增加。这会给个人和社会带来什么问题?建议采取一些措施来减少人口老龄化的影响。


B) At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
目前,一些国家的人口包括相对年轻的成年人,与老年人的数量相比。这种情况的好处大于弊吗?(这个是剑桥12的题目)


A范文:


It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.
(265 words, band 9)




1.简介:介绍主题,然后说有弊。


2.一段关于缺点:就业竞争,过剩劳动力,失业率可能增加,压力对住房和公共服务,社会问题,例如犯罪。


3.一段关于优势:年轻、朝气蓬勃的员工队伍,新理念,创新,采用新技术,提高生产力,促进经济,更多的钱从税。


4.结论:重复/总结。




B范文


Introduction引言
A利大于弊
开头A1:The contemporary worldhas been seeing a unique demographic in some countries which have a more youthful population. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages.
开头A2:It is true that younger adults make up a significant proportion of the population of some nations. While there are certain drawbacks for countries with this kind of population structure, I believe that the individual, social and economic benefits far outweigh these drawbacks.


B弊大于利
Having a population misbalancebetween the old and young,with more of the latter, could encompasscertain disadvantages. Old people, in general, are more experienced and have accumulated years of knowledgeand exposure that they can pass along generations. With less old people in the population, there might be a drain of knowledge. For example, in countries such as India where there are more number of young adults, big companies are unable to effectively traintheir employeessincethere are not many older people to guide them and provide them with proper mentorship.
Conclusion结论


In conclusion, it seems to me that it is advantageous in a variety of ways for countries to have more young adults than elderly people.


In conclusion, some countries are experiencing a significant population changefrom the olden times with more young adults as compared to older people, which I believe is a situation with more benefits than limitations.


优点论述:
Despite the arguments mentioned above, I believe thatyoung people are drivers of progress of a nation. Young people are usually considered to be action-orientedand they take the initiative toadvance in diverse fields. For example, technological development is driven by young minds who are able to tap into their innovationand build new devices such as tablets, smartphones and fitness trackers. Moreover, a larger number of youngsters enhance a country’s multiculturalism. Younger people are more flexible and open to new thingswhich makes them appreciate other people’s cultures and heritages, which further impacts others’ perceptions. For instance, with globalisation, young individuals in Australia have adopted more accepting attitudes towardsAsian cultures that allow everyone around them to be more open-mindedtowards this diversity.


下面是中间段作者观点的论述,才用了两种方法,1多个缺点论述 2一个缺点详细论述


1. Paragraph describing three separate disadvantages:
描述了三个独立的缺点,采用“首先,其次,最后”
On the one hand, countries with a large proportion of young adults may experience various problems. Firstly, if considerable numbers of people leave school or university at the same time, there will be intense competition for jobs. This oversupply of labour could cause an increase in unemployment. Secondly, an abundance of working-age adults may result in higher rates of poverty and falling living standards, as governments or local councils are unable to meet the demand for the provision of housing and public services. Finally, there is a risk that rates of crime and antisocial behaviour may rise if the needs of a young population are not met.


2. Paragraph focusing on one main disadvantage, with supporting ideas:
详细的结果只在一个方面(就业问题)
On the one hand, countries with a large proportion of young adults may experience problems related to employment. If considerable numbers of people leave school or university at the same time, there will be intense competition for jobs. This oversupply of labour could cause an increase in unemployment, or lead to poorer working conditions as employers realise that they can bring wages down and exploit young workers. Another possible consequence might be that young adults are forced to migrate abroad in search of work. An exodus of well-qualified young graduates and workers is often referred to as a ‘brain drain’, and this is not a desirable outcome for any country.


从不同的角度=从不同的角度/位置写下双方的情况,但要清楚你认为哪一面比另一面更重要。
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