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雅思写作主旨段应该怎么写之两种简单的结构
发布日期 :2018.02.05    浏览次数:1763 次

如何形成自己的写作风格,雅思写作拿更高的分,需要你尝试多种写作风格,找到属于自己的写作方法然后坚持下去,下面华盟教育为大家介绍两种简单的方法组织自己的语言。

 

 

方法1:想法,解释,例子:如果你有一个主要的想法,这个简单的格式将帮助你建立一个好的段落。要看一个例子。

 

In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that homework has an important role to play

in the schooling of children. The main benefit of homework is that it encourages independent learning and problem solving, as children are challenged to work through tasks alone and at their own pace. In doing so, students must apply the knowledge that they have learnt in the classroom. For example, by doing mathematics exercises at home, students consolidate their understanding of the concepts taught by their teacher at school. In my view, it is important for children to develop an independent study habit because this prepares them to work alone as adults.

 

首先,第二,最后,如果你有两个或三个想法,只要使用这个格式。如果你只有两个想法,记住“最后”,记住你可以用同一结构的替代词(例如,主要的原因,另一个原因,还有)。单击此处和此处查看示例。

 

1. Topic sentence

2. Firstly

3. Example

4. Secondly

5. Finally

 

I think this is a good way to organise a paragraph. However, it’s best not to use the same structure twice in one essay. Compare the two paragraphs below. How did I structure the second one to avoid repeating "Firstly, Secondly, Finally"?

 

First main paragraph

There are good reasons why some people feel the need to make significant changes to their lives from time to time. Firstly, any new situation that a person encounters can be an opportunity to learn and grow as a person. A new job, for instance, might present challenges that push the person to adapt, acquire new knowledge, or add to his or her skill set. Secondly, a change can represent a break with the past and an old routine which has become boring and predictable. Finally, as well as making life more fun and interesting, new experiences can be good for our physical and mental health.

 

Second main paragraph

On the other hand, it is understandable why people might avoid change. Whenever people are forced to change their lifestyles, jobs or even to move house, they are likely to experience stress and worry as they try to adapt to the new situation. By contrast, we feel comfortable and confident when we stay with what we know. The decision to persist with a course of action or stick to one chosen path often leads to greater success in life. For example, by staying in the same job for many years, a person can become an expert in his or her field, which will lead to better opportunities for promotions and career progression.

 

A few people have asked me whether using "firstly, secondly, finally" to organise a paragraph is too easy.

 

My answer is that using easy organising language like "firstly, secondly, finally" allows you to focus on the real content of what you are writing - topic vocabulary, collocations, examples. This is what the examiner wants to see. You can get a band 9 using "firstly, secondly, finally" if the ideas between these linking words are good.

 

Some simple alternatives to "firstly, secondly, finally" could be:

 

The main reason why I believe... is... / Another argument is... / Also,...

One problem is that... / Furthermore,... / Another drawback is that...

From a business perspective,... / In terms of education,... / From a social point of view,... (this could work for the paragraph in last week’s lesson)

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