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发布日期 :2017.09.11    浏览次数:1933 次

Some people think that the government of a nation should decide the  subject for students to study in university. Others believe that students  should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss both views  and give your opinion.


有人认为政府应该决定学生在大学期间的课程,其他人认为应该允许学生申请自己喜欢的课程。讨论双方观点并给出你的观点。


范文
When it comes to the major selection, the problem of on whom the decision making power should fall remains unsolved. As a result, the essay will cast light on the profits of government regulation and personal autonomy respectively.
On the one hand, it is rewarding for the government to specify the specialty for the university students. By doing this, the authority could better coordinate the subject learners with the country current market needs. Therefore, the embarrassing situation of the shortage of some particular talents and the surplus of other gifts can be circumvented. Apart from realistic gains, academic benefits can also be brought in, since a couple of endangered majors will have followers and successors. Financially concerned, most of the college candidates pursue the popular fields of study such as business, management and accounting, with the unpopular but necessary disciplines such as paleontology, archaeology and philosophy left in desertion and isolation.
On the other hand, government interferences seem unjustified in terms of the human right of an individual to determine his or her own future. Only by immersing oneself in the preferred courses can a person give full play to his or her own potential. Otherwise, education tragedies such as academic fatigue syndrome, behavior problems and drop-outs will not be a surprise. A society cannot be innovative and productive with a group of graduates who are just fulfilling their responsibilities without passion and motivation for what they are doing at the posts.

In conclusion, it is still up to individual students to reach their final decisions, although the government can balance employment market and rescue deserted subjects by the means of credits, scholarships and secured job prospects.

话题2

Many young people leave schools with a negative attitude towards learning.Why does this happen?What do you think can encourage young people to have a positive attitude?
这里的leave school是指辍学还是就是简单的毕业了离开学校。是因为厌学而离开学校还是因为离开了学校所以就不想再学习了啊?


范文:

Furthering education contemporarily is no longer an essential part of future plan among a considerable proportion of the young due to the ill-feeling they suffering from during schooling. As a result, the populace begins to realize that it is the high time for us to analyze reasons of this situation and means to tackle it.

For one thing, both the distorted value system and stressful school life can be regarded as main reasons making young people dislike their study in school. To begin with, seemingly everyone in the entire society is pursuing material life, dreaming of purchasing luxury houses and extravagant cars. Once the young find out that schooling cannot bring what they want badly, they start to complain how useless education is for their dreamed life style. On top of this, horrible memory of school life is what tortures young people even after their graduation. Plenty of homework and a great number of exams are what students have to be confronted with every week, leaving seriously adverse impression for them.

For another, mass media and governments are supposed to work collectively to deal with this situation. Primarily, media are able to use their coverages to modify people’s value system, with emphasizing the significance of spiritual life and avoiding broadcasting misleading and negative information to the public. Undoubtedly, a good educational background does bring people more satisfaction to people’s mental life quality. Additionally, educational departments of governments must be responsible for releasing pressure of students, through designing interesting and effective curriculum. Reducing unnecessary homework and exams can enable students to have more time to get relaxation and do what they are really fond of.

In summary, in spite of negative feeling to learning that majority of young people have, as long as mass media and related governmental offices help the young build up a positive value system and provide less stressful learning environment, interest of learning will definitely be enhanced substantially among them.

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